Hey, can you take a look at my analysis paper and fix any writing issues? If you thing you need to add please add it
I saw the Movie in You tube, Movie name A Bronx Tale. If you want see the movie please see the movie from You tube. Instruction
Highlights indicate errors.
Format:
F1: Your paper should be double-spaced throughout. You can check this in the Format area in Word.
F2: The writing here is often unclear and hard to follow. This makes your ideas difficult to follow. Incomplete and run-on sentences are underlined.
F3: Black should be capitalized.
F4: Movie (and book titles) need to be in italics or underlined.
F5: In a formal paper, do not use abbreviations (or contractions); write out the two words: United States, etc.
Content
C1: The film does glorify Sonny. He is treated with deference throughout the film.
The content of your discussion of A Bronx Tale is thoroughly done, though generalized. You do not make clear connections between the film and our coursework to illustrate your arguments, including specific examples from the film or our work. This is a critical missing piece. Clear examples are required from the assigned materials or from class. A second issue here is writing. You need to follow APA or MLA style to make sure your presentation is correct. The problem with run-on and incomplete sentences is that they make your ideas harder to follow. Make sure you use the grammar check feature in Word, as it will find some errors, and proofread your work carefully. If you have a friend who is willing to proofread your work in exchange for reading theirs is even better. You can also bring the assignment sheet and your graded paper to the Collaborative Learning Center for assistance.
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